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naruto 564 ของแท้ เอาไปอ่านรอ
« เมื่อ: อ. 22 พ.ย. 2011 เวลา 22:40:05 »
Status: PREDICTION
by: JDVII

Naruto 564: Tobi's 3rd Eye

Naruto headbutts Tobi but Tobi Phases out and the mask broken.

Tobi: Damn.... my mask. Well Naruto , I think there's no hope for you now. You see I'm now the sage of six paths and you two we're out numbered.

Naruto and Bee were shock the tobi's appearance, The Left Eye Sharingan, the right eye Rinnegan and the 3rd Eye with Tobi's forehead with Rinnegan and Sharingan occular combination..

Bee: Yugito? Those are...
Tobi: Yes, these are edo-tensei jinchurikis with special eyes too.

Naruto: I saw edo-tensei Madara. Who the hell are you? And Where did you get Rinnegan?
Tobi: Do you remember what I told you the story during the first sage of six paths and his two sons?
Naruto: Don't tell me your the .....
http://naruto-spoilers.blogspot.com

Tobi: Yes, I'm the first, the Eldest son, the great forefathers of Uchiha clan. About Rinnegan, Konan is stupid and wouldn’t listen to me.

Naruto: You Bastard!!!..
Naruto charge with his rasengan but Bee kicks away from Naruto.
Naruto: why bee?

Bee: I can't move and my body moves, its own.
8 Tails: I can't move too, it has something to do his 3rd eye has some special power.

Tobi captures bee and grabe him as hostage.
Tobi: muhahaha don't move naruto or your master gets it. He's my bitch for now.

Naruto: how come...?

Tobi: I'm very surprised Naruto that you immune to my 3rd eye's power. It looks like you do something special in biju mode and some special sealings. Anyways, your master the 8 tails is the missing ingredient in order to create 10 tails biju to complete my moons-eye technique.

Naruto: You'll be needing me also to complete that kind of technique.

Tobi: Fool, I have already kyubi's chakra from gold and silver brothers. Once the technique is completed, this war will be over swiftly. You'll be all my bitches and I'll be having entertainment myself , you will fight sasuke just like I manipulated Madara before. Good bye naruto..

Tobi teleports with bee and along with previous jinchurikis

End.
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Status: PREDICTION
by: The Special One

Naruto 564: The Fight for the Fate of the World

(Due to the forced of the head-on collision, Tobi is smashed into a large tree trunk in back. Naruto extends his left arm upwards and creates chakra arm, which extends and latches onto a nearby branch, holding him still, and with his right hand forms another chakra arm to extend an Oodama Rasengan towards Tobi, however, Yugito slips in between and absorbs the jutsu before it smashes into him. Naruto cancels both chakra appendages and drops to the ground below, barely avoided being attacked from both left and right sides by Fuu and Utakata.

In the woods, Naruto is extremely cautious. He looks around and spots a shadowy figure rushing to higher elevation as it scales its way to the top of a tall tree and hides within the leaves of the tree at the top. Emphasis is focused on his ears as he turns his head and looks back. He barely spots someone hoping into a bush just ten yards in back.)

Naruto (in thought): “Dammit, he’s psyching me out. I can sense them, surrounding me, and with that stupid crazy eye being so dang popular nowadays...”

(Naruto pulls out a few smoke bombs and pops them. A large abundance of smoke clogs a chunk of the forest. The perspective changes to Tobi’s, he has his back up against large tree trunk. The top fraction of his mask is terribly fractured.)

Tobi (in thought): “He’s lightning fast in that mode, didn’t even have the time to activate my jutsu.”

(Tobi peaks his head out and spots Naruto 15 yards away, traversing slowly through the brush, with his back facing. Tobi quickly draws back to his hiding spot.
http://naruto-spoilers.blogspot.com

Meanwhile, the perspective focuses back on Naruto’s, as he’s trying to make as less noise as possible. Seconds later, Naruto is ambushed from behind by Roushi and Han. Naruto turns to face them, instantly, Naruto slumps to his knees, as his soul is latched onto out by Utakata, who managed to flank Naruto. Roushi and Han grasp Naruto by the arms. Fuu zips in front of Naruto and punches him in the gut while he’s being restrained by the others. This disperses Naruto, which is revealed to have been a clone.

In another scene, Naruto is seen walking through the woods once more. He hears noise approaching rapidly from the rear. He turns around and notices that it’s Killer Bee, who has his Samehada drawn.)

Naruto: “*sigh of relief* I’m sure as heck glad to see you!” (Killer Bee lands in front of Naruto.)
Killer Bee: “Ditto, yo.” (Naruto nods.)

Naruto: “My clone fell into one of their traps; that should buy us a little time. I’m heading straight for that imposter, watch my back.”

(Killer Bee nods, the scene switches over to the Kages vs. Madara. Raikage is gripping Madara’s Susano-o from behind. Raikage then arcs his back backwards, this lifts Susano-o up just enough so that Gaara can send large volumes of sand under the opening, Madara cancels Susano-o, only to have a Jinton triangular shape launched towards him, Madara absorbs the technique only to eat a Lariat from Raikage.

Madara’s body is rag dolled, tumbling and flopping all across the ground below. Mei who happens to be near the area expels a large puddle of water on the ground in which Madara lay. Raikage lands next to the puddle, and touches it with his foot. The electricity travels all across it and continuously shocks Madara into place. Gaara, Tsunade, and Onoki accompany them.

Onoki: “That’s right you two! Don’t let up!”
http://naruto-spoilers.blogspot.com

(The scene switches over to Naruto vs. Tobi. Naruto and Bee escapes into the open plain. About 15ft ahead, Tobi exits a portal and is in front of them. The minions surround Naruto and Bee, so the both of them puts their backs together. Naruto points his finger at Tobi.)

Naruto: “End of the LINE whoever the hell you are!”
Tobi: “Watch your impudent mouth!” (The minions inches themselves closer to Naruto and Bee.)

Naruto: “Killer Bee, I’m goin’ for this phony. Shadow clone jutsu! (Naruto makes five shadow clones. Killer Bee puts a short-sword in his mouth, another short sword in his left hand, and wield Samehada one handed with his right.) These guys should back you up!” (Naruto jumps out of one fray and lands into another as he stands face to face with Tobi.)

Tobi: “It seems you’ve come into some new powers. But I also have new fangs to bare!” (Tobi points his his Rinnegan.)
Naruto: “You’re not Madara, so who are you!” (Tobi launches towards Naruto.)
Tobi: “No more words-let our wills do the talking!”

Naruto 565: Truth Revealed!
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Status: PREDICTION

Naruto 564

Tobi: Urgh! **He's fast, I couldn't even make myself intangible..
Naruto goes for the kick
Tobi: Shinra Tensei!

Naruto goes flying back into Bee
Tobi is on his knees holding his face/mask
Naruto and Bee: !?

Tobi is re grouped by his paths
Naruto: What the hell? Who are these people?

Bee: !! That's... Yugito! These are..they must be the jinchuriki
Naruto: So these are the previous jinchuriki?
Naruto: Their eyes? Why do they both have the sharingan and the rinnegan??

Tobi: Because I gave it to them.
Naruto: When did you get the rinnegan?

Tobi: Let's just say...Konan wouldn't listen.
Naruto: You bastard!
http://naruto-spoilers.blogspot.com

Naruto makes an FRS and throws it
Tobi absorbs it

Naruto: What about the next one?
Tobi: !?
From above Naruto launches another FRS
Tobi doesn't even look and shinra tensei's it

Naruto: This is exactly like when I fought Pain? Who the hell are you? How can you use everything that Nagato could?

Tobi: Because I am Nagato!
Naruto and Bee: !???
Tobi starts removing his mask
Tobi: Since Kabuto summoned Madara...there isn't any point in having this mask on.

Naruto: What the....what are you?
Tobi's mask drops

Tobi: I am....One. --Tobi's regular mouth is stichedwhile on his cheeks there are 2 other mouths that are open.
Bee: That wack yo...
Naruto: You're one? What does "one" mean?

Tobi: I am nothing more then a combination of shinobi. Shinobi who are manifested by pure hatred. Some of which, you know of.

Naruto: ...? Wait a second...
Tobi: Starting to catch on? That's right...Akatsuki itself.
Bee and Naruto: ?

Tobi: I take the abilities of shinobi's who die with hatred inside of them. In the beginning, Madara was my first victim. His ability to enter and leavedimensions was part of my eye, the sharingan. Akatsuki was my next goal. Filled with rogue ninja's of the highest caliber, this was perfect for me.
http://naruto-spoilers.blogspot.com

Sasori and Itachi however...died without hatred. And for that I could never gain their power.
Naruto: Enough of this bullshit!

Naruto makes 3 shadow clones
Tobi: The next one...

Naruto attacks him with a planet rasengan
Tobi: Kakuzu's Iron skin!

The rasengan explodes, doing nothing
Naruto: !

Tobi's front mouth opens and threads come out holding him down
From both his sides, Naruto comes charging in with Rasengans
Tobi: The next..Deidara!
Tobi spits out 2 c2 birds from his side mouths which blow the Naruto clones up

Bee is above him just about to slash him down with samehada
Tobi: And now for the Amegakure orphans!
Tobi's arm becomes full of papers which engulf Bee

Bee gets disarmed from Samehada from one of the jinchuriki and is held down by the others
Tobi grabs Samehada
Naruto: Shit Bee!
Tobi swings Samehada at Bee

Naruto blocks it with his chakra arms but they get absorbed and the sword cuts a bit of Bee's leg
Naruto: urgh shit! That was close!

Tobi jumps back with the rest of his path.
Tobi: And now for the finally.
Tobi cuts his arm and starts drawing a circle
Naruto: What the hell is he doing?

Bee: Oh dayum.. Naruto this is the technique that killed Yugito!
Tobi: The shikagami..Hidan!
Tobi turns black and white.
The power of the Akatsuki, is this the end for Bee?

Chapter end

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Re: naruto 564 ของแท้ เอาไปอ่านรอ
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